Thursday, November 5, 2009

Story Time!!!

ONCE UPON A TIME....
Not long ago, there live a princess. She was very beautiful and very kind. When people looked at her, they couldn't look away- for there was something special about her smile. Almost as if it didn't belong on her face! Perhaps that was the reason her parents kept her locked in the room furthest from theirs- a room nearly 700 feet off the ground, in the palace tower.

From there, she would look down at the people coming and going from the Palace. She could see the nearby town where children would play, mother's would gather eggs from the hen houses, and peddlers would offer their goods.

Each night, a butler would bring Princess Joy her one meal of the day and each night, Joy would long for the butler to tell her of the King and Queen. Unfortunately, the butler was deaf and could not hear Joy's requests.

One morning, as Princess Joy woke up, she could not have known that this would be a day she would always remember. Like any other day, she slipped on her house shoes and walked across the room to wash her face. Without warning, she felt the earth beneath her become very unsteady. An earthquake had hit the palace. Joy immediately...


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31 comments:

Elsa!!!! said...

fell through the ground and landed in Prince Charming's arms then they ran away together on his horse and lived happily ever after THE END!!!!!

Lindsey! said...

She ran and tried to get away, but she ended up running into a monstes cave!!!!!

emily allen!! said...

princess joy lived happily for a couple years. but then, one night, she learned that her "prince charming" had been using her for her money, and wasn't even a prince!!! she stole away in the night, taking only some food and one other outfit. she went into the dark forest that people said went on forever...and ever...and ever. there was a rumor that when you got to the middle, you were granted one wish. but there were many evil things in the forest. werewolves. witches. beasts. and many more terrible things that there isn't a name for. joy knew none of this of course since she had been locked away from society. as she walked, she heard many noises. terrible noises. blood curdling screams. cackles. snakes. when it got dark, she started looking for shelter. she eventually found a hollowed out log. she went inside and laid down. soon after, she heard a noise. it was in a language she hadn't heard before. but then, she understood it. it was coming nearer. nearer. nearer. it entered inside her log. and what she saw, made her scream.

emily!! said...

oops. i started writing when no one else posted. but that was my part of the story...

Elsa said...

How could there be a middle of the forest if it goes on forever????

LaUReN said...

It was a really big fat, chubby dragon and it wanted to eat her! :)

emily said...

it was a myth...

marsella said...

she imediatly screamed like marsella would:) haha

hopeless romantic said...

lol....which story should continue, and which should be stopped?

Stephie said...

But she knew to get away from the dragon she must throw gold at it, because Dragons are very Greedy creatures, but she didnt have any gold! So she ran out of the other side of the log, hoping that she could escape!! but the dragon was a fast as lightning! She began to run for it, but the dragon slowly got nearer and nearer, Joy prayed that someone would come and save her. She looked back and saw the dragon running away! Joy wondered what it saw that made it run. Soon she looked back ahead and saw:

Elsa!!!!!!!! said...

A magical farrie, who had ordered the dragon to run away, Now she had one wish to be granted by the farrie! And she wished for.....

Elsa!!!!!!!! said...

A magical farrie, who had ordered the dragon to run away, Now she had one wish to be granted by the farrie! And she wished for.....

steph said...

Fairy actully.

Elsa!!!!! said...

hahaha i never know how to spell that!!!!

emily said...

she wished that she could leave that god forsaken cave and become a regular girl.

KooChunga said...

the ground began to crack open and the princess was swollowed up and went to heaven!

hopeless romantic said...

it was a fake heaven though. one that the elves had created. she soon realized it wasn't heaven and started to run as fast as she could away from it because...

LaUReN said...

the elves were going to eat her if she didnt leave before...

Nathan said...

... they had their stew ready but they already had it ready. they put her in the stew and she sunk to the bottom. she was surprised to see lights from..........

Stephie!! said...

The bottom of the stew. She then said "what is that?!?!" the lights began to get closer and closer, she then saw it was....

emily allen is the best! said...

a water nymph bidding her to go deeper... joy wasnt sure if the water nymph was a friend or enemy....so she....

LaUReN said...

she decided to follow her. it was probably better than getting eaten she thought. she swam down farther and then felt...

emily allen is the best! said...

something like seaweed brushing up against her. it turned out not to be seaweed but it was....

Nathan said...

an animal that ate her and she fell down..... down.... down... down... down... down... down into the stomach. she saw an elf there and said to the elf..... oh no!!!! are you going to eat me?? the elf replied.......

Steph said...

"No, i do not eat humans." and Joy then have being sort of relived asked "where am i?" the Elf replied....

emily allen is the best! said...

"you are in the stomach of an animal"
"well, how do i get out?" joy replied.
the elf thought for a moment and then replied,

emily is amazing! said...

i think this story ended...i guess i'll end it.

"click your heels three times and say, i wanna get out! i wanna get out!" joy did that and was out. she went to the village and started a jewelry business. her parents never found her, but joy was okay with that and lived happily ever after!

THE END!

(hopefully for real this time!)

Anonymous said...

AND THEN THE ELF TURNED INTO A PRINCE, AND MARRIED HER, WITH THE DRAGON AS THE PRIEST!!

THE END!!
XD

linnea (: said...

heh. i am going to write my own ending to the story...


screamed, for that is what she had been trained to do in emergencies. She gabbed onto a bedpost, closed her eyes and waited for it to stop. When she opened her eyes, Princess Joy found herself standing on fresh (kind of rocky) ground. The second she realised she was outside the castle, a humongous smile broke across her face, completely oblivious to the fact that her parents were trapped inside. Then she heard screaming. (Her parents said it was composed yelling, but Princess Joy was not fooled.) 'I must help them!!,' she thought to herself.

So, Joy set out to find a way to help her parents. She decided the best way would be to find men to get them out, so she headed for the town. Unfortunately, the town had not avoided the earthquake either, so when Princess Joy arrived in the town square, all the men were helping clean up their own houses!!

haha i have to go to church now, someone else can finish it if they want.

hopeless romantic said...

linnea your ending is better.

linnea (: said...

haha thanks emily.. i love youre ending too (: